But...for the "real" feedback


ur flow is bad...u didn't ride the beat at all...its like dancing...there are DANCERS and then there are people who have RHYTHM...u don't have RHYTHM

ur delivery is bad because it sounds like ur stumbling and stammering over ur own tongue


the quality is horrible cuz it sounds like ur rapping through a cell phone...

If u bought a CD and it sounded like this, wud u honestly think NOTHING was wrong wit it?

c'mon...really

no one is an expert here...but listen to people man...why wud someone hate on u

u think this shit is sooooooooooooooo good that we ALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLllll are jealous and are HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATIn on u?


get fuckin for real


and get a life while ur at it


stupid ass


Take the criticism and try again

and again

and again

and again

until u get it right

PERIOD.

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