Voted For: Atticus
Blac-Out
c'mon Atticus, wen it cums to Rappin, Wigger, ya wack at this
so fuck it, ill jus put the heat in ya mouth, so u can give the mac a kiss
^
at the wigger lolz, decent wordplay, no real punch though 4/10
this cats a bitch, fall back fore' i pull out my shank knife
and split ya wig down the middle, so next time u think about battlin me, you'll "Think twice"
^diggin the last line, nice wordplay formed into a punch 6/10
this wiggers homo, likes to take pipes, dont even begin lien
fuck wastin a bullet, ill just my pistol swing like wind chimes
^ didn't see a punch in this one actually but it was decent bar 4/10
im sick, my flow siphillis, this bitch can get hit wit the hammers
and wen it do, ill make ya fuckin wig split like bananas
^again the wig splitting? don't use shit twice man, self-glorifyin in first line 2/10
act slick, ill send a slug through ya lip and ya tooth
and U ugly as shit , i kno Dikes that can get more bitches than you
^last line was decent personal, first line i didn't like 6/10
i kno it aint fair dude, battle agin? bitch i dare you
Act like a G, then ill putta Stitch through ya hair do
^nah, weak closer 2/10
24/60 - 40%
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Atticus
Now... Hows That Kid Plan To Stand Up To His Last Out...
...I Practise Dark Arts,
Your A Dark Artist Tryna Shine At This When Its Blac-Out...
^coo playing off his name, might have been worded bit differently to hit harder though 6/10
Dope? Yes, Uum No... I Dont Think So, Ya Signature's Lien'...
...Ya Titles False,
Ya'll, He Blac'd-Out Last Time He Had Dope Signature Lines...
^again the blac-out thing, more hardhitting personal than the previous one though 7/10
Kid, Are You Retarded? Look At Your Name... Rap How?
...Plain And Simple, Initial It,
This Bitch's "B.O. Is Garenteed To Make Ya'll Cats Blac-Out"...
^haha, must be my favorite bar, made me laugh, bold personal 8/10
Even Your Crews Weak, Please... You Are Beyond Late...
...Hmm, Sorry B,
But If Raw Is War Your Not Surviving Beyon-Ce(Cena). (Beyonce)
^good wordplay, closed the deal with this one 7/10
28/40 - 70%