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Old 08-05-05, 11:52 AM   #27
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Voted For: Spoken Word

B-MAC-Good verse.Flow was on-point through the whole thing.DIdn't like the basic rhyme scheme that you had in the verse though.But you had nice internals.Wording was good.COntent as a whole needs to be upped a notch.The concept was meh.

Spoken Word-Flow was good.I like the multis you had.Better structure than B-Mac.Wording was better too.Concept seemed to also follow along with the topic better.But the content was where i think you blew him out.Better description and vocabulary by far.

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203166
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