Voted For: Kamze

WTF? who the hell am i battlin, with a name like 'AITZ'..,
..wit a name like that,join the looney toons, and be one of 'bug bunnys' matez,
^^weak....AITZ...not much of a looney tunes name
I only been on RV for a month, but, i'm already to advanced to be battlin you,
My punches hit so hard, they'll make you jump around..............
.................................................. ........... like a 'kangaroo',
^^meh...ight...but didn't like the set-up for punch
You asked for people wit under '200' posts, But now i rapped, now you got nuttin to say,
I left u speechless, wit writers block, you were left like 'Craig david'...... 'walking away',
^^played and again...wasn't feelin set-up line
'www.rapchat.xpt.net', you say that's where you rep, then why is your ass here,
I remember seeing you on a show, i think it was called,..... 'how to dress them queers',
^^meh....weak
This battle will be real easy, evryone gonna vote for me, and that's witout a doubt,
AITZ why don't you be yourself,at least then you know you changed forum's,.......
.................................................. ...................... 'CUZ YOU A SELL OUT',
^^changing web-sites makes him a sell-out?

Ok...structure was bad.Flow was ight.But punches sucked.VEry uncreative and there were some played lines.1st bar....wat does looney tunes have to do with his name AITZ?2nd bar was an attempted personal...but if failed.It's all about wordplay and metaphors here.

i'll have you roaming around like some snow-in-winter,
im not playin around when my flows hit you like-splinters,
^^basic multi...no punch
u can't match the skillz i throw at ur-fake-ass,
keep ur day job, poppin pills n smokin-that-grass,
^^No punch...
i kill lil kids like this-wanksta-in-RV,
throwin bombs at ur body when im invited to ur-party,
stop now why ur not ahead, still livin at home like a baby-gettin-fed,
^^A punch for once...but weak as fuck
livin in a house full of fakes, hittin u like a speedin car, with-no-brakes
u aint met ur match til you step-to-me,
i dont feel shit bar a scratch, now i'll just let u lay-n-bleed,
^^No punch....
unexplainable with intoxicated lyrics when i grip this mic,
stoppin kamze bitch ass with no threat bar fright...
^^NO punch

Ok...seems to me you focusing too much on flow.You had no multis...but a lot of internals.But i was waiting and waiting for you to throw a punch.You were just talking a blah-blah thing.Only punch i saw was the baby-fed one and that was weak.Work on using wordplay and metas.

Vote-Kamze
RTF
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203166

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