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Old 08-05-05, 01:00 PM   #28
taz
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Voted For: Premanition

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“..Dope? Shit! you can quote that I ‘beg’ to differ..”
Down on two like ya mother, but her legs were stiffer
^Nice punch started strong^
Kid get a grip you couldn’t be sick if ya brains hurled
Eatin from a bin, that’s like an insight to ‘waynes world’
^Umm kinda weak...didnt have anything to do wit ur rhyme^
kid don’t stress, I blame ya girl for them stretched rhymes
cos them overweight stretch lines are bound to effect minds
^good punch only cuz his lines are stretched^
damn just drop the act bitch and pick up your reality
you bout as much a ‘hot sauce’ as Williams was a casualty (*)
^Good comparison which makes it a good punch
this verse will serve you with flows that ‘paste’ to impress
& you beta hope its ‘spreadable’ so you can taste the success
^nice closer way to shut it down^

v/Premanition RTF