good battle..........


i was feeling both verses, both looked good in their own right.....still motion had a clean structure to his piece making his verse flow very well throughout, it was also clear and concise delivering a nice take on the topic, the vocabs in his verse were nice although not as consistent as it cud be, in places it fell off and the complexity wasn't as high as it was to begin with, the best part of the verse i feel was the opening as it showed nice vocabs and imagery with some good emotion in it to.......then sixth sense had a strange structure, especially how it broke up in the end, but there was a line about the structure coming apart and if you meant the structure to be chopped to empower that line then it was dope, other than that you had real nice vocabs in your verse, again though cud be more consistent, i do think that you delivered a better picture to the reader with your verse and the emotion in your piece was above that of still motion.

V/ - Sixth Sense

plz RTF honestly in my tournament battle....
LINK: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202505

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