STRUCTURE-nah man not feelin the structure try and make each line have the same amount of sylabelles and line up.
Multis-Not so bad mutltis you had them flowin nice good job on that.
Flow-was iight not too bad but kinda thrown off becuz of the poor structure.
Not a bad freestyle good concept but u jumped around from topic to topic watch out for that iight..........RTF on my o/m in my sig please..1