man this was very one sided here stanza-it looked like u didnt even try didnt even ahve that many lines to build anything in it really and if it was that few then u shulda at least came up wit more creativity and better vocabulary then jus ending wit simples rhymes like who and u, way and away......DQ-u did a very good job very good at emotions there and vocabulary was good both stayed on topic though but really DQ had the emotions,vocab,creativity just better cuz stanza didnt really show that much of anything really.....so my v/ Drama Queen.......
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......PLZ RTF IN MY TOPICAL BATTLE IN HIGHER THINKING WIT A HONEST VOTE.......

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