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This was feedback posted for Kamze
IP:
Feelin lazy and tired since I been writing verses all day...but..
All of a sudden, you think you a 'vet',cuz u think you gonna got a few wins over people,
But the only chance you stand of being a 'vet', is if you started 'treatin animals',
^^This line will mess you up.
FIrst...he just got here...so how he got a few wins?And it didn't rhyme.
Ur verse didn't have any personals BTW...so it was probably pre-written
As for the other guy...I ain't read it...
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