Voted For: Young Blaze

kid
by the bars u highlighted in my open mic, i could tell u hade the same eye for words i did... becuase those were a couple of my favrorite bars in the shit but i didn't think anyone else would care for them. anyway, ur comments were exactly the kind of thing i want to here about my work...
so i owed ur verse the same scrutiny...
ur first first bar woulda been crazy wit some wordplay on "golden phrases"...cant think of one now, but u get the idea. suicide lines shows u got sick ideas. but u just fell short on impact, it dont even gotta be a punch to get my attention, but ur verse was full of good bars gone wrong, but i liked it... u gonna be killin niggas once u get the delivery together...ima be watchin u... join a league cuz getin ur ass whiped is a great motivater...


young
ur shit was on point kid, no abundance of vocab but instead i saw a well of word play. funny as hell 2nd bar started it for me.3rd bar kinda played(dont act like it aint true!)but didnt fuck up the verse. 4th bar was surprisingly hurtfull, hot idea...5th bar was fuck in funny, i dont care who u are, thats funny. first line of the closer was hot but last line was played(u know it!) but i was feelin it the first time i heard it and im still feelin it now...


young blaze gets the vote..... but watch out for kid chaos...

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