SHODOWN - understand the shit you got going so the weakness of your piece is justified, still it had an alright flow to it and you did manage to stay on topic all the way through. the one thing is that there is a lack in vocabs, and topical pieces are more about complex vocabs to deliver a real nice image of the topic which i don't feel you did here.

DAUBS - for a rushed piece it was ok, flow was nice and i see your not using the text style that you used to for topicals you didn't really get that creative with the topic like shodown but you had the vocabs, nuthing overly creative but i think the plus to your drop was the imagery, it was there and quite strong for a rushed piece and in the end that is what won it for you.

V/ - Daubs

plz RTF honestly on my tournament battle...
LINK: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202505

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