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Old 08-05-05, 06:37 PM   #25
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Voted For: Kid Chaos

the big gun goes BOOM i say that so your small mind understands your own death//
evident doom, i sympisize fo yo gloom its a hard time winning when yours skillz are as good as yo low rep//
^^^Weak punch......2/10
my rhymes are frantic, im makin sure you die slow//
the petty theatrics you call rhyming is the reason you gettin owned hoe//
^^^WEAK........2/10
you supposed to be hardcore? do your "job" whore im waiting//
my punches leave you bloody like a violence-and-gore game rating//
^^Not a punch,talking bout yourself whole bar..0/10
you not really a rapper your just roll playing//
im done saying that won to avoid the hating, but ill still play my game of MC slaying//
^^not much of a punch.....1/10
if your the voice of god then im satan's diciple in a mask//
unless your a fraud the bibles writings should be recycled and da jesus plays re-cast//
^^WEak......2/10

Not one dope line.First off....fix your structure up....it was ugly.Ur flow was choppy throughout the whole thing.As for punches...they were even worse.A lot of bars were just talking about yourself.

son you about as much of a gangster as a movie star actor
cant stand this bastard..i'll shove his first name down his throat backwards
^^Not a punch....set-up was uncreative/...0/10
the only 'chaos' that we see is the lyrical content of ya verse
somebody better hold me back before i put this 'kid' in a hearst
^^NOT A PUNCH...0/10
i sit on faggots like kid chaos..so we'll call him a couch
and since your from georgia you should be used to going down
^^A punch...but a weak one..1/10
you could talk all you want..but i swear i never heard nothing
atlanta falcons?..thats ok cause im used to going bird hunting
^^SO wat...go bird hunt...but here at least trwo a punch...0/10

Man....where to begin.OK...you had a better structure than Kid chaos.FLow was also choppy.Wat you really lacked was wordplay and metas.You were stating some shit a lot.Yeah...you had a personal in every bar...but just cause you called him kid in that 4th line doesn;t make it a personal.

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