damn ur pieces about love alwyas amaze me I really liked the vocab in this a lot. But it seems u slipped up in the middle, like the flow jsut went elsewhere. Except for that it had great imagery and emotion, another phenominal piece from u, overall:8/10 cuz that lil slip up.....please vote on my topicl battle with opt1k in my sig

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