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Old 08-05-05, 11:27 PM   #8
noname
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I didn't know they gave out trophies for worst player in the game,
You must get a lotta time, cuz the only thing more played is your wordplay.
^^^bah....basic....2/10
Call the man white chocolate cuz he's confused within himself,
Only time he 'dropped a gat', was when his toy fell off of the shelf.
^^OK....kinda amutuer wordplay...5/10
Today is a bad day, cuz your punches are gonna blow me away?
HA! Only way you could touch me is if I just had nothing to s....
^^????.......2/10

2 bars just didn't connect well.Basic rhyme scheme which is a definite no.You had wordplay in the 2nd bar which was amueter.THe last bar was probably your worst one.A pretty weak verse.

I would son u.....but tha only way you "chip off tha block" is if u were "discarded Lays"
But i did him a favor
........and "pissed" on his old calender so he could "remember tha Golden Dayz"
^^What the fuck?????........1/10
Damn All The Da same Im not used to calling peeps lames
But....He stuck his dick in a Xbox so....he could be a "head in da game"
^^head lines are played as fuck...1/10
....Im afraid this battle is over homie I was beyond killing you
.If someone touched is tits back is da only time the "feeling you
^^^meh......4/10

2 bars that sucked.But at least every bar had a punch...that the only positive thing I see for you.1st bar was just flat out stupuid.2nd was played as fuck.3rd was meh....close battle...though neither was good.

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