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This is my first post!
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IP:
Voted For: The Revelation
The Rev
Aiight Lols You had Some Aiight Lines Here Some Didn't Rhyme Like The First And Last Bar Play And Game Don't Rhyme Lols Away And S Don't Rhyme Either Man, Try And Get Some Rhyme Scheme In Here Punches Nice Man Wordplay Was Cool Here Call The Man White Choclate Cause He's Confused With Himself Lmao! Good line Mane
Merkage
Meh Kind Of Good Here Structure Was Ass Though Man I THink Your Best Line WasBut i did him a favor
........and "pissed" on his old calender so he could "remember tha Golden Dayz" Funny As Hell Punches Was Cool Wordplay Nice Man Vocabulary Was Shitting Though Try And Work On That Man
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