I think that Souljah took it also, he came first with that "take" or "concept".. The takes were similar but how Solo had the whole memories being lost with time thing going on, Souljah actually had something i could relate too. With a lot of the peple getting Amnesia and comatosing and what not, thats really deep stuff, i feel you could have came with more emotion though, and maybe multiple views would have been cool... for instance the dad getting Amnesia and not remembering, but also from the daughters point of view and how much pain that would cause her because her father doesnt remember her.. would have forced you to use a lot more emotion than you did.. thats the only think that i could see really lacking in Souljahs verse, Solo yours was decent, just nothing really caught my eye.. just kind of the same ol thing that you would expect from this topic.. oh well good job to the both.

v. Souljah.

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