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Old 08-06-05, 12:40 AM   #43
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Voted For: NaRc-UzI

In battles ur like a one handed waitor cause u cant bring much to the Table
How you gonna sign to a label when im cutting ur ass like ur un-paid Cable
^^nice internals....good metas and such
Its not ur fault that ur not talented so ill just be honest and blame Canada*
Ur a fucking faggot who cant bring fire to anyone like a pussy ass Manager
^^well...1st was creative...2nd was worded horribly
I'll come with "Six Teens" to your block and make sure that you Dont Make It**
The only way ill be a "Long Shot" in this battle is if i was spitting Butt Naked
^^Good......

Some good metas and such.Some lines were set-up bad or coulda been worded better for a harder punch.HAd a creative personal with that blame canada thing.Flow was on-point for the most.Some Ok wordplay.


...Your welcome for the loss, n' ima kill this lame
Then bring the Narcs to Uzi like I spelt his name
^^good nameplay...but didn't seem to diss well
So you better be carefull son, watch your back
N' fuck your member title, cuz...
In general... your just wack
^^^DOPE...but coulda placed a multi or sumtin
And Uzi is a gun right?... so wait just a second
He'll be gun-running
...without transporting weapons
^^^worst line in this battle

Seemed to me that you underestimated him here.Coulda made ur lines flow better with some multis or sumtin.And your lines were short as fuck.If you sropped something decent for that last bar....it woulda been in your favor

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