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Old 08-06-05, 02:41 AM   #19
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Voted For: FuxJustAWord

Doomsday-
your intro was huff (gay), that "here comes domesday" part was not good... you had a strong delivery, and flow was pretty decent, some places you rushed your last words up.. you didn't throw any hard punches in this, the one that stood out was the one bout him being Guerilla Black, he's not no Biggie (and i heard that so many times before, just can't recall where).. but i'm kinda shocked because this is a crew battle.. i dunno if you thought you were gonna win based off flow and delivery, but there wasn't one part where i said "OH SHIT! you got him" based off your lyrics..

Fux-
your beginning was bad, at least you warned us and said it would be wack at the start.. lol @ the Tha Q personals... and play off name,
"every dog has it's day but you should could quit yappin,
y fear Doomsday when that shit ain't even happen"

"X Marks the Spot, but in this bout i guess
To be Dope..... Mark needs to Spot some X"

"And Q calls u 'tongue n' cheek,' but wait im confused
Is that your sarcasm or whatever the two of u do??"

your flow was choppy midway through.. delivery was average coulda been stronger hence this is a battle.. but your punches and personals took this easily.

v/Fux
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