Sixth Sense:

I felt your piece was ok. The emotion was on track, but the imagery needed to be more descriptive. I want to feel the words you write, not just read them. Your structure was a little bad, but nonetheless your verse was good. Creativity was there, and you followed the topic well.

Overall: 6.4/10

Still Motion:

Your verse was ok. I felt you should have wrote more, and got deeper into the subject. I really didnt like how you approached the topic, i think you could have wrote something more rellevant. But all in all you had a decent verse. Good imagery, and decent emotion which also could have been more indepth. But still you did good.

Overall: 6.2/10


Vote: Sixth Sense


Close battle but sixth pulled this one out.

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