Paroxysm:

Great verse. You are definately a dope topical writer. Your emotion was perfect, imagery was good. You were very creative, yet kept it simple enough to be a great piece. Vocabulary was good, as was your wordplay. I liked how you mused alot of multies. Not many people can get away with doing that in topicals but you did it well. Great piece.

Overall: 9.4/10


Lady Fiya:

You also had a good drop. Your emotion was good as was your imagery. You were creative and wrote this topic very well. Your imagery stood out the most for me though, it was everywhere. Which is good, you stayed on topic and dropped a good piece.

Overall: 8.8/10


Vote: Paroxysm

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