Voted For: GKillaz05

DI man, CI man hope that you really like to lose chump...
Dimans spit is very cold body must be full of goosebumps...
^^^weak punch......2/10
Gettin' fucked like a loose rump... and he seems to like it....
You dont excite shit your below iight y dont you just quit...
^^no punch.....1/10
Your lines cant progress, there going in circles like a relay...
Readin' your battles is like watchin' a movie n hitten replay...
^^weak......3/10
There all the same, borin' n lame makin' us snore is ya game..
Hopin' your shit pre-write, puts me to sleep, what a shame...
^^weak....lyrics put you to sleep?..c'mon..2/10
Kids to lame, like a movie that wont just get to the point....
Sorry to disappoint, but your not even on a roll wit a joint...
^^no......3/10

Weal verse here.First couple of bars were just weak.They didn't seem to diss well.And that movie replay line is so uncreative.Plus...wat kinda concept is his music puts you to sleep?That's too basic.

your last battle was recycled, soft and played.
and how am i wack, when dimans get you layed?
^^no punch....0/10
your the same ole, nothing new like maples in canada.
matches give you asthma huh, ya like retarded stamina.
^^weak punch...2/10
a W could be yours, might i write the rest soberly.
gkillaz is figurative in battles, but literal with def poetry.
^^^weak.....2/10
youll write ya own i hope, instead of 9ths quote for quote.
and if i lose...ill know they based the votes on posts.
^^No punch...0/10

Ok....you had less lines that Gkilllaz...so you gave him a really good advantage.And you had lines that weren't punches.SAYing you gonna lay him out(1st bar) and the last line will not get you votes.Work on your punches and finding some fresh concepts to use.

Vote-GKillaz
RTF below please
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203256