Solid piece, wasn't expecting anything less from you.

Concept you used was interesting and creative, worked it out very nicely as well. The imagery was at a high level, could picture everything you were saying. Emotion was strong and pure, you got the readers inside the person's mind, feeling everything for ourselves you know. Vocab was kept simple which gave the piece a sort of serene, poetic vibe in my opinion. I can't really give any bad comments on this piece, it was solid, had every aspect a topical piece should have and you worked em all out nicely. Props...

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