Voted For: ColdSTEEL
coldSTEEL, u cant hurt me, the only bars u got are from Hershey’s
Cuz u have bitten rhymes..............
.............ur too fat, I say Thanksgiving and he goes for the turkey
^^set-up played as fuck and punch weak..2/10
Ur verses are boring like text wit laughin gas makes the voters go to sleep
That’s must be his technique, cuz the wins he got were......all very cheap
^^lyrics put you to sleep?..cheap?...1/10
Kid u need to relax, cuz those made-up stories aren’t goin to stack
Steel put ur face in the encyclopedia cuz really u need to face the facts
^^MEh...your best punch...so....4/10
Weak verse here.Structure was good.Flow was ight.Punches sucked ass.1st bar..set-up was played.I mean...you didn't think HErshey bar/rap bars was gonna be creative did you?and the punch sucked.MUsic put you to sleep...horrible concept..c;mon.That last line was your best and that wasn't even all that good.
Drop a line against me?..YOu gotta be a bit-dense.
Your rhymes are chump change,They only add up ta six cents.(Sixth sense.)
^^forced multi..punch coulda been better..but wordplay is wordplay...5/10
Okay.."you did swell.",but coldsteel?.."My lead~lethal!"
So accept leavin wit a"Big L"..Cuz thats gonna b tha only time you see dead~people.
^^Nice wordplay again..but drop the "~"......6/10
Why?..cuz your lackin and Im relentless Fo' real!
He changed accounts ,cuz The punches ur packin got voters losin tha sense's they feel!
^^flowed bad...and punch was weaker than the rest..3/10
Triple 6?...I guess you wanna spit fire like a demon!
Shouldve called you whirl pool....They way you like swallowin sea~men!
^^PLayed wordplay here..2/10
Ive won this battle..esp. with this last round!
Cuz its sorta like playin poker wit a parapeligic..I got this Hands down!
^^OK......4/10
More lines than sixth sense...so that gives you a clear adavntage here.Flow was a lil choppy at times and structure was lacking.But I liked the punches.What you had over sixth sense was you used wordplay.HAd some played ones though....like sea-men/semen.But overall...you verse had more to offer.
Vote-COldsteel
RTF below please
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203256