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Old 08-06-05, 02:05 PM   #1
veyetal
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Voted For: Premanition

v/premantion

you came consistent, not the best i've seen from you, but consistent punches, with a few personals, got the job done. flow was nice, nothing stretched, wordplay was alright, originality i liked....overall, you had a nice verse, nothing seemed out of place, consistency was a main issue here, and you came on top.

wayne, you really need to stop self-glorifying, because you have nice concepts and originality, good with multies, but too much self-glore, which takes away from your verse....and not too mention a structure thats all fucked up. but you do have some skill, realize you dont have to rhyme EVERYTHING, aight, word....no hate

v/prem
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