The Saviour
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IP:
Voted For: Mc Mystique
Mc Mystique: Some pretty weak concepts but they were worded alright. Flow was alright, structure wasn't bad but could be improved. I liked the funeral punch the most probably. Pretty weak verse though.
Conflict: Most of your lines were weak concepts, I liked the mystique concept though, good nameplay & wordplay, but it didn't really work as a punch due to the fact that everyones lyrics change. Structure was ok but try lengthening your lines. Your flow was pretty nice actually, I rapped it and it worked well. But Mystique took this cos he had better concepts and wording.
v/ MC Mystique
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