Voted For: Souljah
Smite my rhymes? Your imagination must be over-excited
Wid that party of wackness in your mouth where no-one's invited
^^mediocre multi....but punch lacked..4/10
Nigga ain't for real, how you gonna step with limited skill
Can't test i'm lyrically defined, you only terminally "ill"
^^whack....doesn't work.....3/10
Nigga you soft like a tit, none of your rhymes hit
If you licked a canine's ass you still couldn't be spittin "fresh shit"
^^PLAYED AS FUCK....1/10
I take it you from Trinidad with your sig white red and black
Oh look we got a new K-Trini.....with rhymes just as wack!!!
^^^OK....5/10...
Like still waters running deep you ain't got no flow
With all these blows, you might as well make this a no show
^^PLAYED.....2/10
OK...had some weak ass lines here.FLow was ok...and so was structure.Creativity sucked as did complexity.1st and 2nd bar just didn't hit well.3rd bar was probably your worse.Dog shit?...soft like a tit?...wtf is that?.Ur best line was the trinidad one....and that wasn't so hot.
Souljah aint shit i come wit sick shit to rest him
Tech aint the best but i'll still 'shovel' ya chest in
^^No punch....3/10
Get it my shits never comin weak like the kid i''m 2 rip
Spit sick 'mouth '2' mouth' datz why da kid got 'flu' lips
^^good multi...weak punch...3/10
Shit u better hurry up cuz im takin over the game quick
Famous? hell no kill a cat make sure u get Framed shit
^^No.....2/10
Yo Soljah give up get embarrassed life goes a scary meal
U say u ride shotti but na the only thing ride is a Faris Wheel
^^PLAYED....1/10
This is in ya mind to rewind no rearangements so this is stayin
Im sprayin a lyrical masterpiece ya shits is layin and not Payin*
^^why ya got * for?no punch....1/10
Mean in the muthafuckin World quit kid im not stoppin
Dick Ride? Not me but u see Tizzle u start hoppin
^^???......no......2/10
Still get away today the day u spitin weak kid quit
im shits sick im done wit u so i split ya 'Lidz' quick ~1~
^^no....2/10
Ok...structure and flow was better than souljahs.But without punches...wat good are they?All your punches either sucked or played.Some lines weren't even punches as it was just you glorifing yourself.So next time...just focus on dissing.
Vote-Souljah
RTF Please
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