The Saviour
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IP:
Voted For: lyrical mage
C-Hood: Nothing hit hard, had some good similes in there though. Your structure ain't too good, try keeping the lines about the same length, as a couple of lines were really stretched. Work on coming up with better concepts as well.
Lyrical Mage: Nothing really hit except that Andy Milinokis line in my opinion, which basically won you this battle as both of you were even in everything else. It was the best line of the battle, the concept was real nice, but it could have been worded so much better to hit harder, still the best line though.
v/ Lyrical Mage
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