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Originally Posted by veyetal
yes, but those are ineffective multies, they sound bad because of the wording....swing some slackness??? like wtf is that.
anyways, text battling is not about multies, there are people on here who think its cool to use multies alot, instead of good punches....but really, when you're writing a diss, you do it to humiliate the other person, not rhyme a whole bunch of times.
multies are a prime tool for audio, they add interest, and other shit as well, with text, you can be more creative, multies don't enhance text that well, unless you know how to use them properly and effectively.
what you are doing, is easy stuff, basic rhyming, just simple multies at the end of each line; you have no internals or anything, no other multies....so your 'mulites', at the end of your lines, dont really resemble multies, if you can understand this without coming at me with beef........
and using hyphens points them out, but are not needed.
word.
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