Voted For: Natural killa

Natural Killa got this...
Why?,you ask.

Well here's tha Breakdown "KIDS!"

Killa's verse:

line(1)-he got GAME in his avatar,and GAme in his signature,what the fuck?
does helook like a ferris wheel to u?,ridin up and down on his schumck
^^^^^^There was no multi's,no good flow of words,and the punch was lackin....but it was a punch.Personal was a personal..at least you had one. 2/10

line(2)-im the grease on the ladder,meaning you gonna stay on the bottom
Kamze's punches all missed(mist) like windsheilds in autumn
^^^^^Nice punch...I like that one,tha first line was okay at best,but tha last line with tha punch was nice.7/10

line(3)-wanna call-out newbies only to show off,like a bold ladies strut
your rhymes all fade out of our minds like an old 80's haircut
^^^^okay punch...not nothing really new,but it was nice wordplay lil multi's in it...like I said tha punch was aiight.5/10

lines(4)-Kamze?,wtf is that shit?to you,the alphabet and ya name's the same
cause you urself don't know wat it's sopposed to be sayin
^^^^Weak and was hard ta spit it..maybe tha way I would've flow'd it and tha way you would spit it might make a lil diff.Still weak for a closer.But it was a punch(Eh..tap.)2/10

In all tha structure was off,and tha 1st and 4th line was weak.At least you came wit punch's,and a few multi's,a lil wordplay,and that 2nd line.It made tha whole 2 weak lines fade away.

6.5/10-


Now ladies an Gentle-men..Here's tha breakDown 4 Kamze!
Hold on ta ur Seat Folks,Cuz this ones a Scorcher.




Kamze-

line(1)-Your rhymes and your punches,are a joke, they're as 'Killa' as your name,
If you start gettin upset, then guess what, you only got yourself to blame,
^^^That was no punch,Real weak...an almost personal,and had no wordplay or multi's...1/10

line(2)-All of a sudden, you think you a 'vet',cuz u think you gonna got a few wins over people,
But the only chance you stand of being a 'vet', is if you started 'treatin animals',
^^^Weak..didnt rhyme at all..real throwback ass punch..0/10

line(3)-You have no experience or skill, so there's no way you'll get a win over me,
Cuz you're like a 'man in a wheelchair',cuz,..........you're both at a 'disability',
^^^^A PUNCH!!!:smile:..finally!..but,it was another throwback line..heard it before an done better...3/10

line(4)-My rhymes hit you right in the spot, cuz you can't reach my level, you just not able,
& don't let my lyrics decide your 'fate', cuz the verdict could be.........'fatal'.
^^^^yet again,self glory is not the intention's of a battle..Damn,You at least rhymed this one,no multi's, good structure.Weak line tho'...2/10

2/10 overall for Kamze's verse...You need ta elevate sum more,cuz there was no punch but 1,an that 1 was weak and played out!

my vote goes for KILLA....

Tha battle was weak 2 me....but Killa got it.

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