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Old 08-06-05, 08:24 PM   #19
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Originally Posted by veyetal
first of all, i did not say this verse was any good, but it does beat yours.

second, i don't really use multies in verses, i only really use them in writing songs or pieces....you even said it yourself

so why would i use it in a diss, when i could spend more time with creativity, originality, and actual good punches.

third, yes, your rhyming is simple......king of whackness, bring some slackness or whatever you put, is not fucking hard to do, thats basic shit.

and lastly, i am not new here, so stfu, i'd own you any day.

word.




Your verse beats mine you saying now?Hmm...so after one bogus verse from someone who clearly didn't read the verse....you gettin all excited.Just goes to show you an egotistical peice a shit.

And why use multis in disses?...well....how about to *gasp*...make it better????

I neva said you were new..read my post again...I simply said that your rhyme shceme was newbish...which is true.

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Originally Posted by veyetal
if you can understand this without coming at me with beef........


And then you saying you own me and to stfu?...funny how before you told me try to reply without the beef....and now you say that shit.And ussualy...in an arguement...the one to diss first is the one who knows he lost.But wateva..I'm done with you and your ego.

So I had no internals and used multis too basic?...well thank you...I will use that feedback to improve.Unlike you...I don't have an ego.

I'm done arguing pointlessly with your stubborn ass.Here's a tip....get your head outta your own ass.

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