Voted For: .Merkage.

Battling me homie not really good for ya health.....
no one takes you seriously
look at ya "name" man da dummy underscores himself
^^^OK......3/10
Look "Jr." You anit tha "Law" but son ya ways are Trife...
but since you wanna crime fight
I 'll show you a win anit worth me "Tekken" ya life..
^^Better........flowed bad....6/10
Call Me Danno but you illiterate fuck i'll throw u da book
and i'll pass u a mirror
And man i'll leave this Rascal Dizzy from his own looks
^^^NO.....2/10
Leave you drowsy somone gonna have to cop u a bed
and you not cool
ya avy needs to place that finger right to ya head...
^^No....3/10

Not enough complexity.Far too basic.1st bar was an Ok concept...but it really lacked in wording.2nd was your best...but again...coulda been better.3rd was just stupuid...just being honest there.4th was whack.I mean...some of your lines coulda hit better if wording was better.

This nigga reppin LL or tha so called dub l's/\But tha R.A.W Reality is he dont know shyt about tha game
Nigga think he havin a seizure truth is im dumpin shellz/\This battle is such a slaughter its a fuckin shame
^^no punch.....1/10
Wow won a tourney round ya cirb, how fuking exciting/\But no 1 gives a shyt, so come back to reality son
U actually won, now we gotta figure out who u were biting/\cuz tha chances of u winning are worse than fuckin a nun
^^Played and basic....2/10
You actually think u gon get signed and hit up ciara ha very tricky/\Dawg u fukin suck snap out of it aint shyt changed
nigga u got less of a chance to blow up than pretty ricky/\Hope you learned somethin cuz im enforcin tha laws of tha game
^^No punch...wft?stop talking about yourself...focus on the other guy....0/10

Too much self glorifing in here.Only punch was the 2nd bar and that sucked.You can't just state shit and expect to get a good responce.It's all about wordplay and being direct with your shit.

Vote-Merkage
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