Dope piece,

decent imagery rhyme sccheme which helped the flow..good structure..

ovrall a good read, keep doin ya thing man.




word, nice imagery my good friend, emotion was dope in the middle verse, uhmm, good flow all the way through, very descriptive and vivid, enjoyable piece, i'll probly recommend it to some peeps, ya hear? aight, keep up my friend, writing fire lately



very dope...very descriptive...structure was tight....wordplay was tight...imagery and vocab was tight...you incorporated some nice multis and concepts in this piece and you stayed very consistent...always a dope drop form you..keep droppin tha hottness.~1~

Let's see the feed you get from one verse compared to the feed I get from this verse and we'll see who is wack. Undoubtedly, you'll say something like 'people are dickriding you'(which has to be true, since I have a grand total of 25 posts on RB), or 'people are haters on here', or 'they don't understand the meaning of rap'. Well, if they don't understand it, go somewhere else and see if anyone else can understand a word you're saying.