Voted For: E.C
yo took this easy good personals good punches connected well flow good structure good n vrything thought u shud have had betta wordplay but w/e good closer lol even tho its a bit self glorifying
new edition-
good flow but i think you should have had betta personals as urs werent very good an u need to elevate wid the punchs had sum ok ideas didnt feel that thy were developed tho erm....good structure anyway rtf here
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