Voted For: Young Blaze

Young blaze-Good vocab for real.Flow and structure was godd.Though the dots could be trimmed down a little bit.Your best line was the cream of the crop/harvest one.What I think you could calm down with is the self glorifing.A lot of bars were you talking about yourself.But you did have bars that hit well.Like that 106n Pk personal a lot too.

PhreeNapdizzle-Man....your verse lacked punches.Damn.OK...here's what...leave multis alone till you get good at coming up with punches.And more personals would be nice.That first bar is the epotome of forced multis."tryna be a monster,showin off your teeth"?....c'mon...what kinda punch is that?.

Vote-Young Blaze
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