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Old 08-07-05, 12:30 PM   #10
leady
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beats ok basic n abit corny.... flow is ok abit repetitive try switch it up abit, delivery is ok a lil monotonous lyrics basic... mhook is ok... second verse delivery is better abit more confident.. flow slips a few times lyrics are abit better aswell... ye cool track not my style n abit of poloshin to do... keep it up
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