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Old 08-07-05, 01:24 PM   #14
KempoMRK
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Voted For: Kamze

Kamze-Some nice wordplay, maybe a bit too much as it didn't allow some straight punches, but good wordplay. Nice flow, structure was good. I don't like the whole explaining thing though, especially as you explained most of your lines. Still decent verse though.

Kid Chaos-Very basic verse, a typical newb verse really. Try coming up with original creative concepts then turn them into hard hitting punches, and be more personal.

So yeah, Kamze took this in every way basically.
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