Voted For: RaDiKaL

I got thunderous text dat make ya ~chest quiver~
and watch how I 'break law' like I ~'just littered'~
^^Weak punch here..but ight..4/10..
When RV mentioned da best textcees,you ~wasnt in da picture~
so dese rhymes are 'sonnin law'(son-in-law-) like I was da ~'husband of ya sister'~
^^sonnin/son-in lines are played....1/10
Dawg you wack,keep thinkin ya not,I'll let ~da piece off at ya~
cause only people 'takin law serious' is ~'police officers'~
^^Ok...best bar but uncreativite still...4/10

Ok...get rid of these(~) things.Just makes the thing look newbish.Thart 1st bar wasn't that hard.2nd was played.3rd was ur best but still wasn't all that.And your wwhole verse was based upon that one concept on law/name.

When you decided to challenge me you decided to meet your creator
This guys hardly hit puberty and already he's a master-bater
^^Played as fuck...2/10
Who this nigga think he iz callin out people left and right
He keep switchin on niggas like a dick and pussy on a hermephadite
^^basic....1/10
Let me end this battle cuz im sure this faggot gotta go 2 bed
The next you see you Dude will be on his Fuckin Deathbed
^^NO punch....0/10

Ok....terrible verse right here.1st bar was played.Anything with puberty and masterbation has gotten played now.2nd was weak.3rd was not a punch.It was just you sayin how the boy will be dead.So next time...use better punches and more creative shit.

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