Voted For: Kid Chaos

imma jus flip da scrcipt/imma break ya
down like tha titanic ship/
^^No punch...0/10
cuz u kno i
give nuttin but chillz/like a prostitute
hoe u gone gimmie tha billz/
^^No punch....0/10
Mad hoez
ask bevis i get nuttin butt head/u probably
thought u was gonna win butt i stay ahead/
^^bitten of Big L....0/10
by now nigga,u should now my style/I don't
battle homo niggaz like u, who see dick and
smile/
^^No punch....0/10
so imma end right here quick/like tha toilet
bowl u jus facin shit/
^^A punch for once...but whack...1/10

OK...only one punch...and that was the last bar.You need to read the tutorials.And that beavis/but-head shit is bitten of Big L in 98' Freestyle.You were bassically talking about yourself the whole verse.Just diss with some wordplay and metas.

youve been annilated downgraded and humilated//
the battle hasn't even begun and you already eliminated//
^^No punch.....0/10
my flow is to powerful you cant stop~it the small rhymes you spit i can bet ill top~it//
and yo hoe was so enjoyable but now this battle ill lock~it and put this shit in my "pock~et"//
^WHack.....2/10
await your "dropped-spit" tho i can "block~your~attack"//
you bein "knocked~bitch" its "shocked~shit" when i "rock~this~black~cat"//
^^No punch....0/10
this childs only problem is the battles he losin see//
after the votes are in this lose equals three!//
^^a punch..but weak as it gets...1/10
youve entered the "hell~zone" and you recievin "shots to yo dome"//
im bringin this battle home punches strikin you in yo dental//
^^Whack....1/10
i killed this mental while rappin to this Who Wanna intrumental//
^^gonna finish that bar?

Ok...you too were talking about yourself too much.Focus on disssing and that only.And stop with the (~) and (//)..just fucks up structure and makes it look newbish.But the reason you got the win is cause you had more than one punch in your verse...while the other guy had one.Elevation is needed here.

Vote-KidChaos
rtf bELOW PLEASE
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