View Single Post
Old 08-07-05, 03:26 PM   #21
Skriptz
Flyweight
 
Skriptz's Avatar
 
Posts: 159
IP:

Voted For: Kamze

Your rhymes and your punches,are a joke, they're as 'Killa' as your name,
If you start gettin upset, then guess what, you only got yourself to blame,
—decent opener, could’ve been a little harder & ya could’ve switched it up
All of a sudden, you think you a 'vet',cuz u think you gonna got a few wins over people,
But the only chance you stand of being a 'vet', is if you started 'treatin animals',
—meh, this line is sorta played here, but it connected
You have no experience or skill, so there's no way you'll get a win over me,
Cuz you're like a 'man in a wheelchair',cuz,..........you're both at a 'disability',
—nah, not feeling this punch
My rhymes hit you right in the spot, cuz you can't reach my level, you just not able,
& don't let my lyrics decide your 'fate', cuz the verdict could be.........'fatal'.
—weak closer


he got GAME in his avatar,and GAme in his signature,what the fuck?
does helook like a ferris wheel to u?,ridin up and down on his schumck
—wack opener, schumck as the last word? ..no son
im the grease on the ladder,meaning you gonna stay on the bottom
Kamze's punches all missed(mist) like windsheilds in autumn
—weak punch, could’ve made this harder than that
wanna call-out newbies only to show off,like a bold ladies strut
your rhymes all fade out of our minds like an old 80's haircut
—almost, but it wasn’t decent either
Kamze?,wtf is that shit?to you,the alphabet and ya name's the same
cause you urself don't know wat it's sopposed to be sayin
—sayin & same.. meh they hardly rhyme here

overall this battle was weak.. both structures need work.. the flow
practically needs some help on that, didn’t see any personas up in
both ur verses, but overall Kamze took this one.. punches came
harder.. even though you both have the same rating.. Kamze took
this battle w/ punches that weren’t as wack
__________________