DQ - Nice internal usage. I mean realli on point and clean. Nice storyline and good dictin. But it feltvery piece meal though. Iunno I got that feeling from it. THat there were details left to be described.

Stanza - Im sory man. It wasn't clean at all. You wrote like a very short poem that didn't have much effect at all. Keep working on it man.

Vote = DQk she was complete and complex.,

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