Thread: .Sound Check.
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Old 08-07-05, 08:56 PM   #10
~Lady Fiya~
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Aight, just peeping this, almost forgot to..... beat's somethin i'd fux wit.

-Mystery: you decent, ya flow was str8... your emotion's missing..

-Hook: straight.. lyrically coulda been better

-Six: your flow was good, you know it was right on and what not.. your lyrics can be upped some..

basically y'all emotion can be increased somewhat, make people tremble at hearing y'all say "Get Sound Check"!!.. i like the bump in y'all hook tho, sound like y'all bouncin and what not... set up nicely.. it's pretty okay for what it was.
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