as expected both brought dope pieces to the table here.....

first off, daemon came with more of the complex vocabs, i don't think there is anyone who comes more complex than you, you stayed on point throughout the topic and brought an original approach to the whole thing instead of taking a basic approach, i was feeling the imagery and emotion you delivered also through your words and it really is hard to find a fault, the only thing i can point out is that in like one or two bars the flow got choppy even though it was only a little.....
spoken word took an interesting approach to the topic with the whole adam and eve concept and delivered an orginal piece that flowed well throughout and stayed on point right through to the end, the imagery and emotion was in there making out a nice picture of the concept you were getting at, not as complex with your vocabs as daemon was but i felt still that yours was the better piece, it was one i could relate with the given topic easier and i enjoyed it more....

so...
V/ - Spoken Word (aka Flow Intelligent)

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