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Old 08-08-05, 02:44 PM   #14
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Voted For: Natural killa

natural killa took this battle. kamze's verse was all broken up n shit. he didnt have alot of punches that did anything really.
also "people" and "animals" dont rhyme so you aint get points for that bar really. Also kamze's opener and closer were kinda weak.
Natural Killa's verse was decent some ok metas in there and alot better flow in the verse. He took the opener and closer cuz his punches were a lil bit better.

Kamze's best bar=
My rhymes hit you right in the spot, cuz you can't reach my level, you just not able,
& don't let my lyrics decide your 'fate', cuz the verdict could be.........'fatal'
(ehh this was not too hot especially for ya closer, work on that)

Natural killas best bar=im the grease on the ladder,meaning you gonna stay on the bottom
Kamze's punches all missed(mist) like windsheilds in autumn
(this was ok, pretty decent bar. it was my favorite of the battle)
my vote goes to Natural Killa
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