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Old 08-08-05, 05:36 PM   #18
Artemis
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Voted For: Natural killa

put nothing in ya prof.,scared,surrounded by death,and confounded by sweat
Cause Taz's is E-motion-all,like everyone's moving around on the net
I'm pissing on your spit,nobody feelin it...why you ask?,cause ya tryna glisten on shit
and your verse and tazmania talking's the same...cause nobody listening to it
squashed u like a salamander,your spits are gay,like your color ya mouth up with valendar
and after this you gon be lost in dazzed(days),like vagrants without a calendar

A real nice verse homie...some good punches and personals in there and u shud always work on ya structure homie!!!!

7/10

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Thought he was born blessed to stand out from da rest, truth is ur born depressed with two female breasts on ur chest/battle me homie u need a bullet proof vest, admit it Killa, u impressed at how quick ur girl undressed at my request/Natural deffinitaly not ya rhymes, Killa deffinitaly kill your own rhymes... aint hard ta beat em wit a sick nasty mind/Natural Killa got bitched out in his own thread, Drakel bitched this cat out now he actin dead time ta unwind/You aint no homicide killa wanted for a murder...this cat lifted his gat then bowed down cuz he saw c. murder/He bow down to pussy niggas that cant rap, so he bow down to himslef.......thats a rap...

For a start you need alot of work on ya structure cuz that shit is just hard to read....some aight ryhmes but no real hard hittin punches sori homie but keep elevating!!!

5.5/10

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