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Old 08-08-05, 06:44 PM   #15
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Voted For: El Dios

Heres my breakDown!

1st King Slimm:Talkin in bitch slapped like a macho man/
kan carry ya weight in plastic u bust lika grocery bag/

^^^It didnt even rhyme,An tha punch was like ah compliment..of sum sort!

I give it 1/10


Now!

El Dios:Locked the King behind bars,with no food,just let the bitch go Slim…..
He was S.ecertly L.ivin I.n a M.etal M.anner ,left to die,so find his next of kin….

^^^This was nice,good personal and punch...nice structure an using tha bold text where need'd..it flow'd together..both had no multi's...

I give it...7/10

I wish yall would've had a 6 line battle atleast...but then again..

my vote is for El Dios..he got it hands down...

Return favor please...any 1 of tha links..:thumbs:
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