Succès Facile!
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Voted For: El Dios
Heres my breakDown!
1st King Slimm:Talkin in bitch slapped like a macho man/
kan carry ya weight in plastic u bust lika grocery bag/
^^^It didnt even rhyme,An tha punch was like ah compliment..of sum sort!
I give it 1/10
Now!
El Dios:Locked the King behind bars,with no food,just let the bitch go Slim…..
He was S.ecertly L.ivin I.n a M.etal M.anner ,left to die,so find his next of kin….
^^^This was nice,good personal and punch...nice structure an using tha bold text where need'd..it flow'd together..both had no multi's...
I give it...7/10
I wish yall would've had a 6 line battle atleast...but then again..
my vote is for El Dios..he got it hands down...
Return favor please...any 1 of tha links..:thumbs:
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