Beantown's Finest
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Voted For: taz
very weak battle...wow umm...
Flow - Taz...the lines were short so the flow sounded better not neccessarily makin it a better verse...nirt was all over the place...sounded alil outa control...work on that
Metaphors - umm... Taz...simply because of his last bar...it was still weak but it was a metaphor...nirt really didnt have any metas at all in his verse...pretty simple...work on that
Punches - wow...tie...all the punches in this battle was weak as hell...that made this battle borin as hell...yall gotta attack the other mc n come hard wit it....dont throw random punches that belong in a open mic verse feel me
Personals - i saw obsolutely NONE !...nuff said
Wordplay - NONE...nirt jus because u put dashes at the end of every punch doesnt make it complex...its still pretty weak n u need come harder wit it...so i wud kill that if i was u but im not so u can do whatever u want
Originality - once again...tie...both nirt and tas had SIMPLEEE verses...no serious vocab no complexity...that killed this battle !
overall - blahh...gotta go wit Taz simple because it flowed better and was an all around SLIGHTLYYYYYY better then nirt's..."your shit bores-man,and rhymning words?,well you sure-can't
cause the only twist i see in your lines comes inside your-pants" ????...that sounded pretty gay 2 me !!!!!!!!
Vote - Taz
weak battle tho...yall can improve alot...no hateon either of yall iight...1
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