Voted For: El Dios

King slim-that bar was creative I guess.But it was whack.The set-up had actually nothing to do with the punch itself.The set-ups must be relevant to the punch somehow.The punch itself coulda been ight if worded better.

EL DIos-Bettter.set-up was relevant to the punchline.Structured better.Nice wordplay.Complexity.Wat esle can I say..you got this by far.

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