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Old 08-08-05, 09:24 PM   #2
CataclyzM-i-C
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Voted For: Kamze

he got GAME in his avatar,and GAme in his signature,what the fuck?
does helook like a ferris wheel to u?,ridin up and down on his schumck
^^wackk...i didnt know a dick was called a schumck...sounded like u was jus tryin to rhyme anythin wit fuck

im the grease on the ladder,meaning you gonna stay on the bottom
Kamze's punches all missed(mist) like windsheilds in autumn
^^wack...nuttin hard about that at all...real weak !

wanna call-out newbies only to show off,like a bold ladies strut
your rhymes all fade out of our minds like an old 80's haircut
^^blahh...better then the 1st 2 but nuttin hard about these punches at all !...pretty random 2...personals are alwayz more effective then random punches !...especially if they aint hard

Kamze?,wtf is that shit?to you,the alphabet and ya name's the same
cause you urself don't know wat it's sopposed to be sayin
^^horrible closer...flow was bad...punch was worse !!!

^^alot of random punches that didnt hit hard AT ALL...pretty simple verse...work on makin personals and metaphors that hit hard !!!!



Your rhymes and your punches,are a joke, they're as 'Killa' as your name,
If you start gettin upset, then guess what, you only got yourself to blame,
^^wackkkk...not hard hittin at all

All of a sudden, you think you a 'vet',cuz u think you gonna got a few wins over people,
But the only chance you stand of being a 'vet', is if you started 'treatin animals',
^^o my lord...cornyyyyyyy...didnt even rhyme (not sayin a good bar has 2 rhyme but if its as corny as that...at least make it rhyme...wow !

You have no experience or skill, so there's no way you'll get a win over me,
Cuz you're like a 'man in a wheelchair',cuz,..........you're both at a 'disability',
^^blahh...that was an ALRIGHT punch...probly the hardest hittin punch in the battle and it was still pretty weak !...simple metaphor but at least it was a metaphor !

My rhymes hit you right in the spot, cuz you can't reach my level, you just not able,
& don't let my lyrics decide your 'fate', cuz the verdict could be.........'fatal'.
^^flow is awful...ur barz have no structure...work on that...and the punch was bad but it was a better closer then natural killa's

weak battle...no complexity or hard hittin punches...i gotta vote for Kamze tho...i was jus feelin his verse more simple as that !...some1 else probly sees it different then me but thas how I see it... no hate on either of u but work on ur lyrics...


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