Voted For: Still Motion

Troop- Alright The best Aspect of this verse was "Imagery". I liked the details you went. The Emotion should be upp a little. Vocab was good, you had a good balance. To me this was more like basic, didnt have no metaphors, no lots of emotion, just plain imagery. Which was good, but to me it was more basic vividly portrait though. The Appraoch was kinda played out to me, the concept wasn't too good as well.

Still Motion-I liked your verse. The Best Aspect was the imagery. Which was very detailed More poetic. You Had Vocab, which was good. THis was a good battle in the category of "Imagery"...Word


Conclusion- This was a hard decension but I vote for Still Motion. Basically his Concept was more better, and the approach was more better. The imagery Gave the concept and the approach, More Greater. Troop, You had a good verse but the concept was Un-Creative, the approach was good but the concept was just bleh, I liked your imagery very Much Detailed. So I had to vote for who had the best Concept....and Approach Plus creativeness.....V/ Still Motion

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