Odi et Amo
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Voted For: GKillaz05
diman
your last battle was recycled, soft and played.
and how am i wack, when dimans get you layed?
^okay opener, not really hardhitting though
your the same ole, nothing new like maples in canada.
matches give you asthma huh, ya like retarded stamina.
^hehe good wordplay, cool punch
a W could be yours, might i write the rest soberly.
gkillaz is figurative in battles, but literal with def poetry.
^okay bar right here
youll write ya own i hope, instead of 9ths quote for quote.
and if i lose...ill know they based the votes on posts.
^lolz at first line, nice
GKillaz05
DI man, CI man hope that you really like to lose chump...
Dimans spit is very cold body must be full of goosebumps...
^aight opener, could've been worded better
Gettin' fucked like a loose rump... and he seems to like it....
You dont excite shit your below iight y dont you just quit...
^nah not feeling this last line, first was good
Your lines cant progress, there going in circles like a relay...
Readin' your battles is like watchin' a movie n hitten replay...
^hehe nice bar, good wordplay formed into punch
There all the same, borin' n lame makin' us snore is ya game..
Hopin' your shit pre-write, puts me to sleep, what a shame...
^felt to me like a filler followin up your real killer bar
Kids to lame, like a movie that wont just get to the point....
Sorry to disappoint, but your not even on a roll wit a joint...
^hehe nice wordplay again as a closer
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